A Writer's Notebook

A Severe Mercy May 19, 2006

Filed under: My Book Nook — Lita @ 2:21 pm

I'm getting back to The Hobbit, but something called finals has sprung up in between posting and myself. :P So here are some thought-provoking quotes from A Severe Mercy, by Sheldon Vanauken, which I have nearly finished now.

It is not possible to be "incidentally a Christian". The fact of Christianity must be overwhelmingly first or nothing. This suggests a reason for the disliked of Christians by nominal or non-Christians: their lives contain no overwhelming firsts but many balances.

How strange that we cannot love time. It spoils our loveliest moments. Nothing quite comes up to expectations because of it. We alone: animals, so far as we can see, are unaware of time, untroubled. Time is their natural environment. Why do we sense that it is not ours? C. S. Lewis…asked how it was that I, as a product of a materialistic universe, was not at home there. "Do fish complain of the sea for being wet? Or if they did, would that fact itself not strongly suggest that they had not always been, or would not always be, purely aquatic creatures?" Then, if we complain of time and take such joy in the seemingly timeless moment, what does that suggest? It suggests that we have not always been or will not always be purely temporal creatures. It suggest that we were created for eternity. Not only are we harried by time, we seem unable, despite a thousand generations, even to get used to it. We are always amazed at it – how fast it goes, how slowly it goes, how much of it is gone. Where, we cry, has the time gone? We aren't adapted to it, not at home in it. If that is so, it may appear as a proof, or at least a powerful suggestion, that eternity exists and is our home.

 

The Hobbit May 8, 2006

Filed under: My Book Nook — Lita @ 10:53 pm

I finished reading Tolkien's The Hobbit, after several friends encouraged me to do so. Finally,I can hear them all say. They even kindly put up with me through my complaints of it being boring up through Chapter 7 or so. Chronicles of Narnia aside, I am not a lover of fantasy and thus found trying to understand the dwarfs, wizard, hobbit, and goblins a bit unsettling. The word "wizard" always conjures up (no pun intended) images of evil in my mind, and had me prejudiced against the story from the first paragraph.

Nevertheless, having promised the before-mentioned friends that I would read it, I determined to persevere. I did not have the "can't-put-it-down" feeling until Bilbo's riddle scene after he was captured by the goblins. After that I took it with me everywhere I went. So, dear friends, forgive me for ever calling it boring and complaining about it. :D

Now though – should Christians even be reading, let along writing, works of fiction that have no God in them? At least not God as we know Him? What purpose does it serve? There are no dwarfs, elves, goblins, or hobbits in this world. What is the point, and what good does it do?

My answer will follow in a day or two, but I'm interested in seeing what others think, and what reasons they give.

 

The Greatest Piece of Literature of All Time May 5, 2006

Filed under: My Book Nook, Ruminations — Lita @ 5:21 pm

I just finished reading Bertolt Brecht's play *Mother Courage and Her Children. It is at once funny, sad, and inspiring. Of course, it is meant to embody realism, and if the back of my book is worth quoting, it "is Bertolt Brecht's most passionate and profound statement against war." However, I wanted to post one of the "critical issue" questions asked by my literature professor at PHC, and my thoughts on the subject.

The Bible is also utterly realistic – indeed, more so than any merely human writing can ever be. Yet how is it also utterly different from this deliberately "realistic" play?

The Bible is the greatest piece of literature of all time. Within it is every possible worldview and inspiration for nearly every genre of writing, sci-fi and fantasy included. There is a major difference, however – everything in the Bible either has happened or WILL happen. As the question says, the Bible is starkly realistic. Who doesn't cringe at the account of the rape of Dinah (Genesis 34) or Tamar (2 Sam 13)? The horrible truth is laid out plainly, without minced words yet also without explicit detail. Then think of the things that seem almost non-realistic to us, but are indeed very true and real. What about when King Saul visited the witch of Endor (1 Samuel 28) and she called on her familiar spirit (demon) and saw instead the dead prophet Samuel? What of Ezekial in the valley where the old, dry bones lay, the flesh growing back on them, then the wind coming and sweeping living breath into them again? Then look at the beasts described in Revelation. "Four beasts full of eyes before and behind…like a lion,…like a calf…a face as a man…like a flying eagle…each of them six wings about him; and they were full of eyes within." (Revelation 4:6-8) Just think – and those are the GOOD beasts! Don't forget the locusts that came forth from the smoke of the bottomless pit, and remember that they didn't come after the plants and animals – they came after MEN! Man-eating locusts…no joke. "The shapes of the locusts were like unto horses prepared unto battle; and on their heads were as it were crowns of gold, and their faces were as the faces of men. And they had hair as the hair of women, and their teeth were as the teeth of lions. And they had breastplates, as it were breastplates of iron; and the sound of their wings was as the sound of chariots of many horses running to battle. And they had tails like unto scorpians, and there were stings in their tails…" Besides all these, the Bible is full of poetry as well, and there's some romantic poetry as well! "Let him kiss me with the kisses of his mouth: for thy love is better than wine. Because of the savor of thy good ointments thy name is as ointment poured forth, therefore do the virgins love thee. Draw me, we will run after thee: the king hath brought me into his chambers: we will be glad and rejoice in thee, we will remember thy love…" (Song of Solomon 1:2-4)

Nothing I've studied over the past couple semesters can even come close to matching the Bible for literary treasure. Yes, I've learned a lot from all the books, but the Bible surpasses them all. I love this quote from the novel Ben-Hur, when Judah Ben-Hur's mother is answering his plea of "Who am I, and what am I to be?" He has been painfully scorned by a old Roman friend, and wants to know if, and if so, why, he is inferior to a Roman. After going through the history of the Jews and of Israel, she says, "In such light as I could, my Judah, I have set our great men before you – patriarchs, legislatros, warriors, singers, prophets. Turn we to the best of Rome. Against Moses place Caesar, and Taruin against David; Sylla against either of the Maccabees; the best of the consuls against the judges; Augustus against Solomon…Finally, O my Judah – if such speech be reverent – how shall we judge Jehovah and Jupiter unless it be by what their servants have done in their names?"

*Some objectional language in the play.

 

Another Quote May 4, 2006

Filed under: Kindred Quotes — Lita @ 10:48 pm

This one never fails to inspire and stir me. 

"Tell me…do you not feel a spirit stirring within you that longs to know, to do, and to dare, to hold converse with the great world of thought, and hold before you some high and noble object to which the vigor of your mind and the strength of your arm may be given? Do you not have longings like these, which you breathe to no one, and which you feel must be heeded, or you will pass through life unsatisfied and regretful? I am sure you have them, and they will forever cling round your heart till you obey their mandate. They are the voices of that nature which God has given you, and which, when obeyed, will bless you and your fellow men." ~ James A. Garfield, in a letter to a friend

 

Literary Criticism May 4, 2006

Filed under: Writers' Hangout — Lita @ 11:00 am

I love writing literary criticism. Really, I do. It just takes me awhile to get into it (and I'm usually forced, like for my Western Literature class). Right now I'm writing a short response to Florence Jones's "T. S. Eliot Among the Prophets," from American Literature, which deals with Eliot's The Wasteland. She is contesting a thesis made by Claude E. Magny in his article "A Double Note on T. S. Eliot and James Joyce." His thesis: In The Wasteland, we are in the bleak even time before the Incarnation, before the unique, exceptional event took place, that which, moreover the cards are unable to predict, because it is outside Time.

In response she writes: With respect to Mr. Magny, I suggest that [the] Judeo-Christian perspective in Time prevails also in Eliot's poem.

I don't agree with either of those totally. So I had to come up with a new one: In T. S. Eliot's The Wasteland, the author combines a Judeo-Christian influence with a fatalistic perspective, creating a work that contains all the despair of Jeremiah and Isaiah but none of their hope of redemption.

Now I've probably bored any hapless reader to tears, so I'll stop there. :D

 

InkShoStoMo May 2, 2006

Filed under: Writers' Hangout — Lita @ 6:27 pm

Yes, I know it looks weird, but it stands for Inkies Short Story Month. My beloved writers’ forum, The Inkspiller, has decided to call May the unofficial Short Story month. Some of us were longing for NaNoWriMo again, so the admins came up with something else to get us motivated to write. I’ve decided to try a fantasy, a genre I have NEVER written a single blessed word in before. So, I’ve turned my imagination loose…and it’s conjuring up some veeeery interesting things. I’m expecting to see a heavy Narnia influence, since that is really the only fantasy I’ve ever read. Well, I did read some of Dawn L. Watkin’s children’s books, but those are all rather disjointed. However, about the only Narnia influence coming out so far is in the narration style. My characters are…let’s just say they’re rather interesting, and I’m quite shocked at what my imagination, when set loose on it’s own, comes up with.

The title of the story - which has to be under 10,000 words, and knowing me, will be right at the limit – is Rising of the Sun. I was struck with the idea while reading in Isaiah one morning. Isaiah 59:14-21, if you’re interested. Doesn’t that passage just give you chills to read it?

EDIT: I’ve created a new page where I’m posting my InkSho story as I write it. Enjoy, if you can, and feel free to leave any thoughts, ideas, or criticism. ;-)